Final edit for Jack Bauer wiki

My final edit on the Jack Bauer wiki can be seen here, under the "biography and pre-24" headline. This last edit had a similar flavor to that of my first one. Due to my poor luck with getting wikipedia and the editors of its plethora of articles to accept my added material, I chose to play "English teacher" again and do some more grammar editing. A tense change here and there, as well as some re-wording to make the paragraphs more fluid.

Well, I guess that's my last required edit on wikipedia for this class...

cheers